Thursday, June 5, 2008

literary luminary

1.They sat quietly for a while, shifting their postures as if taking turns. Dominguez sighed. Willie reached inside his shirt pocket, fishing for a stick of gum. It was Monday. It was morning. They were waiting for the old man to come in and get the workday started.

2. "Dad! Dad! Dad!"

3. other nights, when the cards went bad and the bottles had been emptied and his mother was already asleep, his father brought his thunder into Eddie and Joe's bedroom.

2 comments:

Jessica D said...

Eddies coworkers are sad and still can't believe that Eddie has died.

Eddie shows how much he wishes that he could speak to his dad, or have his dad acknowledge him

This shows Eddie's terrible memories of his dad beating him and his brother Joe in one of his drunken rages.

Cristina Sicari said...

They were waiting in the morning to have Eddie walk into work like he always did. They can't believe he is really dead.

Eddies trying to call to his dad. His dad doesnt hear him and acts like Eddie isnt even there, just like his real life.

Thie shows the bad relationship between Eddie and his father.